my love
like a note
in a bottle
floating in the ocean
my heart
like a ship
lost at sea
my soul
like a ghost
on the foredeck
riding the rising tide
my hope
like a port
in the storm
you...so beautiful
are the sand on the beach
where my ship comes to rest
beautiful...
ReplyDeleteBeautiful is right. I love metaphors...the sand, beach, ship...very nice.
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